what we are learning is to make fairy tales in our own way this is Goldilocks and the three bears but with a twist this is my story.
Scaredy-locks
Hi im goldy locks but some people call me scaredy locks because of this a story i'm about to tell you so here it is.
When i was young i had a big phobia of spoons ok it might sound silly but i did.
One day my mum set me to get some punkle berries and i got lost.
Then i went along the path and on the way i saw little red stinky hood and she stank when people looked at her her eyes watered and when she went to pat animals they'd run away any way she saw me i ran as fast as possible then i went in a house i closed the door and i opened my eyes and there it was spoons it must have been a spoon maker's house i screamed in fear i hear footsteps slowly coming down the stairs.
Someone pulled me out I knew it was furry I was in shock I turned around and opened my eyes and there they were big bears I ran inside with my eyes closed I burnt my hand then I broke everything they grabbed me out of the house and took me to their home they gave me porridge and ice for my hand then they took me home with my basket full of punkle berries my mum was so glad to see me. now me and the bear are best friends But i call him honey because he loves honey but i'd prefer punkle berries.
Hi Maddison I like your story but next time fix some mistake and check your spelling.
ReplyDeleteHello Maddison,
ReplyDeleteYour story was good. It was interesting to see that a girl is scared of spoons. I loved that you added your WALT. Maybe next time you could check your punctuation and your spelling.
Eden