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Tuesday, November 21, 2017

The Book Of Memories

This week we have read a story about a unicorn. After we read the story we had to create our own and making it rhyme and using more punctuation. I enjoyed doing this because I made my story into a picture book with a slide show. Next time I will use more punctuation.
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  1. AnonymousNovember 21, 2017 at 12:02 PM

    Hi Maddison,
    My name is Mikaela and I'm a Year 6 Student in Room 8. I love the way you made all the people yourself and how you made everything colourful. It would be good if maybe next time you could check your punctuation. I think your work was amazing and look forward to your next post.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 5, 2017 at 9:50 AM

    Hi Maddison
    My name is Tanvi from Papatoetoe west school. I love your slide show, you can always go back and look at some of you key memories. Maybe next time you could put a baby picture of you or a video from before. You could also put in some punctuation.
    Bye

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