W.A.L.T.... Use appropriate langue features for a pick a path story
What I found hard was putting it together
What I found easy was writing what my story is about and the charters
Wednesday, September 27, 2017
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Hello Maddison, Anisia here from Room 8, Year 6. I really like how you didn't just make a normal story, you let the bloggers finish the story. Maybe next time you could check your words so it makes sense. Do you like doing this type of writing?
ReplyDeleteHello Anisia thanks for the amazing comment.
DeleteAlso thanks for the tips And to answer your question I love this style of writing because you can let the readers pick their own path.
Hi Maddison my name is Alex and I am a Year 6 Student from St. Bernadette's School. I really like your pick a path story because it has a lot of information and you used descriptive words like scatter. Next time maybe you could reread your work to find any mistakes like putting full stops after a sentence. I look forward seeing more work from you Maddison.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison,Its me Talia from room 4.I really like your Pick a path story.Next time maybe you could try using more full stops in and add more detail.I like the part when amanda goes missing.
ReplyDeleteHi Maddison, It's me Siale from Room 4 I really like your pick a path story and how your friends kept on going missing that gave me the goosebumps a little. I like the part when Amanda goes missing so you went to go and find her and then when you came back everyone was gone. Will there be a part 2 of this pick a path story?
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