My Before And After Comments
here is one of my before comments 26 June 2016 at 19:29
Hi Miss Waho this is really cool and we should keep it and i like how it does reading and numeracy together and yeah i love it so much and School Bo is so cool and yeah keeping it is a good idea thank you we can vs people from different schools
as you can see i have not finished with a full stop and I have not put a capital I
here is my after comment
28 June 2016 at 15:03
Hey its me Maddison Miss Waho I like how you put a link to your Voki and I
think that it would be good for literacy so i can read a part of my story to Voki
and that is how i improved
good bye.
