W.A.L.T
What I need to do next time is not put a lot of buts
What I learnt was that there was dogs were used in the war from the story
What I learnt was that there was dogs were used in the war from the story
here is my story
One scorching cold night i was born my family they named me Freda. I had a lot of brothers and sisters and my life was perfect. After a few days i had to go Lucy put me in a box I was wondering why then a man came and said what a lovely puppy can i keep her?" Lucy said are you going to war?" The man said ' yes". So Lucy replied in the saddest way and said goodbye Freda .
I was sad and thinking where is this man taking me, I'm scared as the man was taking my in his bad. The sergeant said what a stupid idea to take a puppy into war!Then the man said she will be helpful Then the sergeant let me stay. As days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months I got bigger and much more helpful I got rid of rats and caught birds when gun shots weren't heard . As the man who i thinks name is Sam took me home to my owner Lucy I was the happiest i have been since I caught my first bird
I was sad and thinking where is this man taking me, I'm scared as the man was taking my in his bad. The sergeant said what a stupid idea to take a puppy into war!Then the man said she will be helpful Then the sergeant let me stay. As days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months I got bigger and much more helpful I got rid of rats and caught birds when gun shots weren't heard . As the man who i thinks name is Sam took me home to my owner Lucy I was the happiest i have been since I caught my first bird
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