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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, September 7, 2017

Is Graffiti Art Or Just Messy

W.A.L.T.... We are using persuasive writing and facts to sow our opinion.
What I found hard was trying to find good facts to help my side grow 
What i found easy doing the graffiti in google drawings

Is graffiti art or just messy

The definition of art is the human creativity skill and imagination, typically in a visual form such as painting or sculpture. Is graffiti not visual? It’s a way for the artists to express themselves.

Although it is wrong that does not mean that it is not art. If someone made a huge mural with awesome detail would you not call that person an artist? Because I would. Graffiti will help the creator to show a better form of art for people to notice because it is normally on busy streets.

I think that graffiti is one of the hardest forms of art because you cannot erase it or even get rid of mistakes and you can't get rid of it but it costs the government $2,000 dollars the reason why I think it is harder to do graffiti is it is harder to get texture you need and shadowing in drawings some people have made beautiful pieces of artwork threw graffiti.

How i know graffiti it is a form of art even that it is illegal in new Zealand we have a lot of graffiti but it is the best art I have ever seen and they all have a meaning behind them. We have most people think it is messy and gross but it is wonderful and beautiful and people love it but the government are getting rid of it new things are getting built everyday but they are just going to get


Wednesday, August 23, 2017

Freedom Quote

W.A.L.T use words and pictures to convey our thoughts
what I found easy was the picture i drew was easy for me
what i found hard was thinking of a quote

Wednesday, July 5, 2017

The Girl And The Clown

In the past few weeks for writing we have been writing our own legends. In the show not tell structure and it was a little hard to try get some words right and make sure it pulls the reader to wanting to read more.

Wednesday, June 21, 2017

The Man In a Room

W.A.L.T We are learning the writing structure show not tell

As the shivering man fell upon the frozen floor. The man picked himself up and limped to the back of the room. As the man dozes off there are crunching leaves and breaking branches the man awoke startled. With his heart pounding like a cheetah as the leaves and branches got louder and louder. As a creek in the door frightens him as a shadowy figure lined up with the light in the door crack. The man limps to the door to see who's there but no one is to be seen. The man begins to panic his heart is pounding like its coming out of his chest.

 As a hollow drop feel on the floor the man saw the most frighting seen a grizzly bear is on the roof. He began to limp outside the door as fast as he could the bear saw him and began to chase him. Now he is in shock panicking thinking about his family he prays for the bear not to find him. And his prayers were answered the bear left and he quickly got to the cabin as the door made a big "bang". He began to listen for a growl or something but there was silence nothing to be heard. He dozed into a dream with his family and his corer was back on track then a bang awoke him it was a gun shot. He toke a deap breath and hid in the dark so he woudn't be seen as the gun shots got bigger and bigger his lungs were pounding at each gun shot.

Tuesday, May 16, 2017

The Tailor

The Tailor
W.A.L.T learn how to free write from a picture next time i need to add more punctuation
this story is a story about a tailor who hates things under his rug but he finds something unusual under his rug 


Today I decided to make a story about something under a rug I don’t know why but here we go.
back in 1994 a tailor was making a beautiful dress and he saw something under his rug he just thought it was his sewing machine pedal so he left it two weeks later the bump was still there he decided to look under the rug and there it was his scissors he has been looking for they have been there for about 5 months or so

The next day there was another bump under the rug and the tailor decided to get a chair and hit but he put his chair and looked under the rug and it was a little puppy from one of his customers earlier. so he picked up the puppy and made the dress the next day.

he gave the puppy a bow. when the owner came to get her dress he gave the puppy to her as well the owner was so glad to see her  puppy. and she gave the tailor a big hug and left the store that’s the story i have written sorry about the facts but it was just to let you know something's new or old just whatever but anyways thank you for listening and goodbye


Wednesday, May 3, 2017

My Holiday

W.A.L.T: Use the correct structure for a recount. What I liked was hanging out with my nana. What I could do next time is to add more punctuation 
Beauty And The Beast 
this week in class we have been writhing recounts on what we did in the holidays here is what I did in the holidays 

Last Friday I stayed at my grandmas who our family call mama and we went to rolleston pool because she lives close to it but I only played between two pools and one I mostly went in was the deep pool because there was more equipment to play with.
when we got home i went on the computer and played roblox

Two days after my nana took me to see beauty and the beast. At the palms reading cinema before the movie she took me to Kmart and bought me new clothes, after that we got to the movies and it was packed! But we didn’t give up so we went to line up then we got to the front of the line we quickly got to the front and got the last two seats we entered our cinema.Then found our seats and we began to watch the movie. Around  three o'clock my nana dropped me off home and i went to bed and watch my program called impractical jokers The show is about a group of friends embarrassing each other in public.

Then that night I woke up to a noise it was a big thump and i got out of bed and opened the door looked out and I saw a little girl run past my door i don't have a little sister i have two brothers
I thought because I watched a lot of horror movies that night it was just a hallucination because I get a lot of them. fact a hallucination is something you see but it’s not there anyways I followed the girl but she disappeared into my mom's room so i quietly opened mums door and the little girl flew into mums stomach and mum woke up and i ran out of the door into my room Sometimes my hallucinations get out of hand.

Thursday, April 13, 2017

The Anzac Puppy If I Was The Charter

W.A.L.T
What I need to do next time is not put a lot of buts
What I learnt was that there was dogs were used in the war from the story  

 here is my story 

One scorching cold night i was born my family they named me Freda. I had a lot of brothers and sisters and my life was perfect. After a few days i had to go Lucy put me in a box I was wondering why  then a man came and said what a lovely puppy can i keep her?" Lucy said are you going to war?" The man said ' yes". So Lucy replied in the saddest way and said goodbye Freda .

I was sad and thinking where is this man taking me, I'm scared as the man was taking my in his bad. The sergeant said what a stupid idea to take a puppy into war!Then the man said she will be helpful Then the sergeant let me stay. As days turned into weeks and weeks turned into months I got bigger and much more helpful I got rid of rats and caught birds when gun shots weren't heard . As the man who i thinks name is Sam took me home to my owner Lucy I was the happiest i have been since I caught my first bird 

Thursday, April 6, 2017

Leadership

This week we made a leader creature with clay w.a.l.t what i learnt was it is hard useing clay

Monday, March 20, 2017

My Story A Twist Of Goldylocks

W.a.l.t
what we are learning is to make fairy tales in our own way this is Goldilocks and the three bears but with a twist this is my story.


   Scaredy-locks

Hi im goldy locks but some people call me scaredy locks because of this a story i'm about to tell you so here it is.

When i was young i had a big phobia of spoons ok it might sound silly but i did.

One day my mum set me to get some punkle berries and i got lost.

Then i went along the path and on the way i saw little red stinky hood and she stank when people looked at her her eyes watered and when she went to pat animals they'd run away any way she saw me  i ran as fast as possible then i went in a house i closed the door and i opened my eyes and there it was spoons it must have been a spoon maker's house i screamed in fear i hear footsteps slowly coming down the stairs.

Someone pulled me out I knew it was furry I was in shock I turned around and opened my eyes and there they were big bears I ran inside with my eyes closed I burnt my hand then I broke everything they grabbed me out of the house and took me to their home they gave me porridge and ice for my hand then they took me home with my basket full of punkle berries my mum was so glad to see me. now me and the bear are best friends But i call him honey because he loves honey but i'd prefer punkle berries.